And the ones kept dormant with doses of fear
My perspective about the whisperings has been condemned
The way the eagerness left my spine and slipped out the cracks in my heels has left my jawbones an eerie muted shade of purple
Interwoven with swelling cyanotic veins I can feel my mouth locking shut
And I let the television characters carry the conversation
It's quiet
Dude, Isaac. Your writing is so different. This is a compliment.
ReplyDeleteYou manage to use words I don't see very often. They're smart and they're important and they're complex. And then you mix that with the line about the television characters, holy crap that was a good line.
I don't know what I'm trying to say.
I just like how you mix the complex and the simple and the poetry and the science and the abstract and the intellectual all into one.
#original
This was me trying to alleviate stress.
DeleteYou made my day with the comment.
Funny how your comment is longer than my post
I love this those last lines really tie it up with a bow I really liked that it was short it was simple and made me read into it.
ReplyDeleteOh Isaac. This was incredible.
ReplyDeleteI've read and reread this post. I really love it. I love how you illustrate your thoughts.
ReplyDeletemmhmmm. simple and oh so so sweet.
ReplyDeletethe description you use seems to give everything a new meaning.
ReplyDeleteand the last line.