Every drop that fills your frame
Is exquisite, and ostracizes my limbs into shame
The curls in your hair, on the end of your toes
And the freckles slipping down the tip of your nose
Create a race so rapid and quick
Often my fingertips need awakening from a needle prick
I'd like to ask you about foreign countries and constellations
Or perhaps we may critique facial expressions then plan a vacation
To places in mentality of lasting significance
Like self-actualization or cherished times of remembrance
I bet you'd smile when your sad just to spite the tears
I'm sure you scoff and laugh at your childhood fears
And replace them with things that may not exist
But their relevancy to you is enough for my help to enlist
In the salvation of your fingers and tender mind
Darling, there aren't many left to of your kind
Above any aspiration or beautifully lit dawn
I wish to see you without makeup on
Then I'd hope and pray
That I would have the nerve to say
Darling you look the best today
I can quite easily say I'm in love with this.
ReplyDeletemy favourite line was the one about critiquing facial expressions.
This all went together so beautifully and lovely.
well okay that was incredible. and i just pictured you reading it when i read it.
ReplyDeleteYES. all of this. yes.
ReplyDeleteISAAC THIS IS SO GOOD
ReplyDeleteAHHHHHHH. SO. GOOD.
ReplyDeleteOne of your best
ReplyDeleteOne of your best
ReplyDeleteSimply perfect. Your writing style + passion = jaw dropping beauty.
ReplyDeleteThis is absolutely incredible.
ReplyDeletei love your writing. The end.
ReplyDelete